That was, in short, heartbreaking. But excuse my rebuttal, when I say, "I always give my poems to the intended recipient—if I didn't, how would I know that I was truly their friend or special someone? Our bond is proven not by the words, but the intention instilled in them, the coalescence of our souls on a page. Were I to misconstrue another's will, my words would sour on them, and my artistry turn to nothing but gibberish, nonsense ordered to be pretty."
this was disturbingly accurate! I feel like I have to rethink my approach to relationships… which is a phenomenal conclusion to “a prose poem and a buzz feed quiz baby” lol
... Okay, so. This is probably accurate. Except I'm too self-conscious to say "Hi" (let alone "I love you"), and as such, I've never even been in a relationship before, so I can't really say for sure. But, like I said, this is probably accurate.
the way that i couldnt click anything else after "goodbye" hit so hard bc it reminded me of how i had to block my exes and couldnt talk to them anymore. i miss them sm even tho they all hurt me a lot.
I'm a bitch for break up stories because I'm a sentimental person who's bad at goodbyes (in general, at work, moving flats, selling old stuff, not only in relationships), so this hits a very specific note for me. Even more so, same as almost everybody, I have some past experiences that enhance that effect. And yet, the ending is disappointing and immersion-breaking. I did not choose anything related to writing poems, and in the end was characterized as "too embarrassed to share poetry". I guess the results of the quiz require some fine-tuning. Still a cool experience, though.
Forgive me if I'm wrong, but isn't the Ex portrayed as gender neutral—same as the player as well? I don't recall seeing any she/her pronouns anywhere in the game, but I've only replayed it like 2 times, so
Yeah, they're points... Very misogynistic points. Which is making you sound like a douche, and from the way not a single person agreed with your comment - other people agree. Also, your name is tododeku and you don't know how to use your 'your's ... that is not any better lol
i figured the love interest was a guy and i (not actually me, i'm a boy) was a girl in this situation, it didn't come off as bitchy at all it just came off as someone who never knew how to love
The ex is also being uncomfortable, they don't know how to keep some behaviors in to themselves. I think they know how to love? But don't know how to be cooperative, and be open to eachother. They didn't had that much time to talk about their feelings, just love and hangout which it looks like the mc or you hated the serious talk because they lacked the experience or does not want to deal with those kind of situations. It is close enough to not know how to love, they just didn't know what to do
You probably didn't meet some other guys who acts that way, but they are some people with these kinds of personalities (I recommend meeting people you can build with, not just chill with.) And the developer didn't show any genders in the talk. But hey, some people don't like accepting gives after those situations as it upsets them,, in their sight, it seems like you're trying to move on from the situation just like that but they want you to open up and have a talk about the problem. You never looked at the NPC's view and only looked at yours, how much of a rotten, and spoiled NPC they are, but they are sad deep inside. It's not talking shit, it's opening up on how they felt on your pattern. You never apologized in the story, you just tried giving them gifts to move on, it's like "here are (gift)s, let's move on and forget about it okay?". This couldn't be accurate to yours, but it seems like your ex wasn't prepared for any relationships. (I don't have specific details in your story but i'll try putting my opinion and thoughts) But you two must've planned dating without any deep thoughts for it, you moved for that opportunity without knowing what's going to happen and you weren't aware of your ex's actions(if you were aware, i don't know why you accepted in the first place). You could also try talking to them about it, if they can't cooperate with it, then they must fix him/her -self and you have rights to be mad, or sad, and leave.
UHH, FORREAL?? like its so selfish of them to say that smh, why would they insult like that after just ignoring the NPC's thoughts?? i bet theyre a big problem on their relationship too smhhhhhhhh
I wouldn't,, say that immediately. But yes, there is a chance that they were the problem in their old relationship. I am not the one who would like to point out words out of the blue. Though they should think more about the others, i slightly agree with the selfish part as they did just called the NPC spoiled and rotten, not knowing why they act that way. But ofcourse, they must have this past or going through something that it made them feel this way. I will not judge, but they should know what they're saying to others.
(Also i have noticed you also made an alt account to respond to the discussion,, or.. arguement.)
They're.. just an NPC. You're right, but what we were talking about is the personality and your thoughts about it which won't come good if it was a real person. I don't even think you read my response properly base on how you replied.. or.. you just ignored it.
OKAY first of all you made the situation and made a fight already, second of all YEAH the NPC is just an NPC but YOU did not try understanding what you cannot understand and stay AT YOUR OWN SELFISH MIND! Thats what david was trying to talk about. You can't stop by just saying all of those thinking "I'm done with this game lmao" It doesn't matter if you're over the game already, we are talking about something else. Well maybe you cant handle the responses and dislikes but make a different excuse? Bro just apologize to them you're the one making it worse. You're literally doing the "acting without thinking". This is why you go through these shit. "DuMbAsS"
Please stop spamming, you clearly did not try to understand the others as it weren't really a fight. You are making it worse, as Pxppy is right.. You should have just apologized instead of making the others feel worse about your action response. SoftBlues tried talking to you, but you turned it into an arguement. PuddleWater gave their thoughts but you immediately put a rude response onto them.. How are we the ones making it worse? I don't know about Pxppy, but between me and them, we just had our own conversation.. and honest thoughts. But..
You gave us a rude spam telling we have to chill and we are making it worse? You were gone for days, coming back in a second to reply in a single comment with a rude thought opinion, or so you think a public worthy opinion. You don't have really the rights to act like that after what you did to most of the users, you can't act like you're the one who's getting jammed as you're the one who made these and asked for it. Pxppy's right, you're acting without thinking.. So maybe you should think about it throughly and hopefully read the responses fully and carefully and apologize. If not then what lesson did you learn? Why did you do all of this? What did we do to you? All we did is put our thoughts and opinions, but you never appreciated it or responded to it nicely.
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That was, in short, heartbreaking. But excuse my rebuttal, when I say, "I always give my poems to the intended recipient—if I didn't, how would I know that I was truly their friend or special someone? Our bond is proven not by the words, but the intention instilled in them, the coalescence of our souls on a page. Were I to misconstrue another's will, my words would sour on them, and my artistry turn to nothing but gibberish, nonsense ordered to be pretty."
Thanks for wrenching my soul
welp. my hear hurts. but i loved it!!
stop ohmygod this was such an emotional rollercoaster. i demand compensation.
but seriously. this hit me right in the feels. and it was sorta accurate too.
oh gosh
Did make me think a fair bit, cool game.
oh fuck
sweet, but Aloof to accurate
this was disturbingly accurate! I feel like I have to rethink my approach to relationships… which is a phenomenal conclusion to “a prose poem and a buzz feed quiz baby” lol
it felt as if i was being stared into, i mean i didn't even realise i was like that but now i recall i am...
That was disturbingly accurate- I genuinely cried at that, it was really pretty
Thank you for making this :))
gooooooosh, this made me cry - internally. this is soo lovely, ( *︾▽︾)
thank you for this o(*￣▽￣*)o
this made me cry
thank you so much for writing this <3
Uh this was SO good I feel personally attacked!
Eu também mdss
... Okay, so. This is probably accurate. Except I'm too self-conscious to say "Hi" (let alone "I love you"), and as such, I've never even been in a relationship before, so I can't really say for sure. But, like I said, this is probably accurate.
Wow, this was extremely well written and powerful.
Sweet, But Aloof? dang
eek i got sweet but aloof!!
i love this game! i usually hate heartbreak and sad things like this but this was really cute!
i got sweet and aloof!
awesome game brah
this was so sad i wish i could hug the poor person
This was incredible! I loved this! And it hurt!
Woah
Okay this is amazing
I.. I love it
It hurt me so bad in the best way <3
oh my god. this is beautiful! (also i love ink <3). thank you for making this. oh wow
Ouch, this hurt in the best way possible. An amazing short story; love the quiz format!
This is amazing. I have to admit, it made me tear up. You write so beautifully.
the way that i couldnt click anything else after "goodbye" hit so hard bc it reminded me of how i had to block my exes and couldnt talk to them anymore. i miss them sm even tho they all hurt me a lot.
we've never fought or broken up or anything, but this reminds me of my gf and what im scared will happen with us in the future :(
I'm a bitch for break up stories because I'm a sentimental person who's bad at goodbyes (in general, at work, moving flats, selling old stuff, not only in relationships), so this hits a very specific note for me. Even more so, same as almost everybody, I have some past experiences that enhance that effect. And yet, the ending is disappointing and immersion-breaking. I did not choose anything related to writing poems, and in the end was characterized as "too embarrassed to share poetry". I guess the results of the quiz require some fine-tuning. Still a cool experience, though.
bro i was NOT expecting to cry this hard 💀
how could you have gotten it so correct?
everyone had sweet but aloof guys ^^
OMG WHAT?! HUHHH? Such turning events! Very good game to get a little cry out, defo reccomend!~
why are you doing this buzzfeed
17 Fireworks That Will Trigger Your Love For Flashes! Number #4 Will Shock You!
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are u okay op
ngl i left like tearing up LMAO
I would love if you could say "I hate you" at some point in this.
Same xD
sweet but aloof
Forgive me if I'm wrong, but isn't the Ex portrayed as gender neutral—same as the player as well? I don't recall seeing any she/her pronouns anywhere in the game, but I've only replayed it like 2 times, so
You're making yourself sound real douche-y ngl
Yeah, they're points... Very misogynistic points. Which is making you sound like a douche, and from the way not a single person agreed with your comment - other people agree. Also, your name is tododeku and you don't know how to use your 'your's ... that is not any better lol
i figured the love interest was a guy and i (not actually me, i'm a boy) was a girl in this situation, it didn't come off as bitchy at all it just came off as someone who never knew how to love
You yourself don't know how to love then ._.
uhhh how now??
??????? LOLL
The ex is also being uncomfortable, they don't know how to keep some behaviors in to themselves. I think they know how to love? But don't know how to be cooperative, and be open to eachother. They didn't had that much time to talk about their feelings, just love and hangout which it looks like the mc or you hated the serious talk because they lacked the experience or does not want to deal with those kind of situations. It is close enough to not know how to love, they just didn't know what to do
You probably didn't meet some other guys who acts that way, but they are some people with these kinds of personalities (I recommend meeting people you can build with, not just chill with.) And the developer didn't show any genders in the talk. But hey, some people don't like accepting gives after those situations as it upsets them,, in their sight, it seems like you're trying to move on from the situation just like that but they want you to open up and have a talk about the problem. You never looked at the NPC's view and only looked at yours, how much of a rotten, and spoiled NPC they are, but they are sad deep inside. It's not talking shit, it's opening up on how they felt on your pattern. You never apologized in the story, you just tried giving them gifts to move on, it's like "here are (gift)s, let's move on and forget about it okay?". This couldn't be accurate to yours, but it seems like your ex wasn't prepared for any relationships. (I don't have specific details in your story but i'll try putting my opinion and thoughts) But you two must've planned dating without any deep thoughts for it, you moved for that opportunity without knowing what's going to happen and you weren't aware of your ex's actions(if you were aware, i don't know why you accepted in the first place). You could also try talking to them about it, if they can't cooperate with it, then they must fix him/her -self and you have rights to be mad, or sad, and leave.
UHH, FORREAL?? like its so selfish of them to say that smh, why would they insult like that after just ignoring the NPC's thoughts?? i bet theyre a big problem on their relationship too smhhhhhhhh
I wouldn't,, say that immediately. But yes, there is a chance that they were the problem in their old relationship. I am not the one who would like to point out words out of the blue. Though they should think more about the others, i slightly agree with the selfish part as they did just called the NPC spoiled and rotten, not knowing why they act that way. But ofcourse, they must have this past or going through something that it made them feel this way. I will not judge, but they should know what they're saying to others.
(Also i have noticed you also made an alt account to respond to the discussion,, or.. arguement.)
They're.. just an NPC. You're right, but what we were talking about is the personality and your thoughts about it which won't come good if it was a real person. I don't even think you read my response properly base on how you replied.. or.. you just ignored it.
OKAY first of all you made the situation and made a fight already, second of all YEAH the NPC is just an NPC but YOU did not try understanding what you cannot understand and stay AT YOUR OWN SELFISH MIND! Thats what david was trying to talk about. You can't stop by just saying all of those thinking "I'm done with this game lmao" It doesn't matter if you're over the game already, we are talking about something else. Well maybe you cant handle the responses and dislikes but make a different excuse? Bro just apologize to them you're the one making it worse. You're literally doing the "acting without thinking". This is why you go through these shit. "DuMbAsS"
Please stop spamming, you clearly did not try to understand the others as it weren't really a fight. You are making it worse, as Pxppy is right.. You should have just apologized instead of making the others feel worse about your action response. SoftBlues tried talking to you, but you turned it into an arguement. PuddleWater gave their thoughts but you immediately put a rude response onto them.. How are we the ones making it worse? I don't know about Pxppy, but between me and them, we just had our own conversation.. and honest thoughts. But..
You gave us a rude spam telling we have to chill and we are making it worse? You were gone for days, coming back in a second to reply in a single comment with a rude thought opinion, or so you think a public worthy opinion. You don't have really the rights to act like that after what you did to most of the users, you can't act like you're the one who's getting jammed as you're the one who made these and asked for it. Pxppy's right, you're acting without thinking.. So maybe you should think about it throughly and hopefully read the responses fully and carefully and apologize. If not then what lesson did you learn? Why did you do all of this? What did we do to you? All we did is put our thoughts and opinions, but you never appreciated it or responded to it nicely.